scent of pine
brings me
racing back
(on metal
roller skates),
to the days
of black and white;
shiny tinsel,
hung on a tree,
six-foot
and Charlie Brown,
to leave room
for heirloom ornaments
that still sit
in my mother's attic
wrapped in
newspaper
with prices
that are
way out of date.
4 comments:
Fantastic detail, especially at the end (the out of date prices). Those things do stick in the mind. Beautiful work.
The details, carefully chosen, have effectively brought to the fore a December scene of the past. ;) The black-to-dark-to-light-grey effect of the last line is a touch of genius; now there's a contribution from the digital world (grin).
Thank you so much, SL! :D
this is, itself, a snapshot. personal but universal, the frozen christmas of some log ago. nicely done!
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