tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post3944962023466667581..comments2023-07-25T10:29:52.517-04:00Comments on Falling Plum Poetry: Christmas TripStaying in Balancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14729612779930162079noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post-64805963903581477362009-01-05T22:08:00.000-05:002009-01-05T22:08:00.000-05:00this is, itself, a snapshot. personal but universa...this is, itself, a snapshot. personal but universal, the frozen christmas of some log ago. nicely done!joaquin carvelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post-9302085771487106812008-12-08T20:28:00.000-05:002008-12-08T20:28:00.000-05:00Thank you so much, SL! :DThank you so much, SL! :DStaying in Balancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14729612779930162079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post-77483282848195921912008-12-07T09:26:00.000-05:002008-12-07T09:26:00.000-05:00The details, carefully chosen, have effectively br...The details, carefully chosen, have effectively brought to the fore a December scene of the past. ;) The black-to-dark-to-light-grey effect of the last line is a touch of genius; now there's a contribution from the digital world (grin).S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post-16262548491871003482008-12-04T07:49:00.000-05:002008-12-04T07:49:00.000-05:00Fantastic detail, especially at the end (the out o...Fantastic detail, especially at the end (the out of date prices). Those things do stick in the mind. Beautiful work.MSMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12201596148177707298noreply@blogger.com