You know what would be fun ... using the first two lines as a prompt with a bunch of people. I am so sure no one would come up with what you did. Still, though, I think it would be neat to see how the poems change and differ with such contrasts as the first two lines.Here's mine:Pale and cold,I dream of the tropicsWaves lapping on the shoreTaking me away ... if only in my mind
That's a great idea and I love yours!
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