Elegant, elegantelegant ....the objective observer....a river flowingpast that whichis already goneunderstanted understatedLinda
Thank you so much, Linda! Lately, I have had a hard time stepping back and seeing my poetry objectively. It is nice to get another opinion.
I like this! I really like what you did with the words- you made it such a visual thing.
Thanks, Andrew. I think, sometimes, the visual aspect of a poem can be as powerful as the literary aspect.
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Elegant, elegant
elegant ....
the objective observer....
a river flowing
past that which
is already gone
understanted
understated
Linda
Thank you so much, Linda! Lately, I have had a hard time stepping back and seeing my poetry objectively. It is nice to get another opinion.
I like this! I really like what you did with the words- you made it such a visual thing.
Thanks, Andrew. I think, sometimes, the visual aspect of a poem can be as powerful as the literary aspect.
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