Falling Plum Poetry

Friday, October 31, 2008

i cry in my dreams
over painting
and themes
of brand-newness
and gifts unexpected
in times unconnected
and changes suspected
it seems I've neglected
my dreams

4 comments:

Art and Poetry said...: Its a great rhyme! themes and dreams, I like to begin a rhyme and end it on the same rhyming sound like this one!; October 31, 2008 at 12:35 PM
Staying in Balance said...: Thanks! I never used to write rhyming poetry--ever. Now I like to occasionally.; October 31, 2008 at 12:46 PM
TACParent said...: Very nice, as usual!; October 31, 2008 at 11:43 PM
Staying in Balance said...: Thanks!; November 1, 2008 at 11:40 AM