tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post784597703394257117..comments2023-07-25T10:29:52.517-04:00Comments on Falling Plum Poetry: GrandmotherStaying in Balancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14729612779930162079noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post-3631866775029488032008-10-24T10:47:00.000-04:002008-10-24T10:47:00.000-04:00Thanks so much for reading!!Thanks so much for reading!!Staying in Balancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14729612779930162079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post-44688860303182119992008-10-23T08:31:00.000-04:002008-10-23T08:31:00.000-04:00Your prose is riveting, with choice lines here and...Your prose is riveting, with choice lines here and there (in particular: "I was annoyance embodied, in her house with the French Toile wallpaper I was not allowed to touch."). I do admire the progression of your story-telling. I've also read some of your poems here; I've very much enjoyed the untitled one posted on October 5th. Cheers.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post-61902794889913205942008-10-21T20:38:00.000-04:002008-10-21T20:38:00.000-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Staying in Balancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14729612779930162079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-93857568337144464.post-80940520319104028212008-10-21T13:32:00.000-04:002008-10-21T13:32:00.000-04:00And good riddens! Now shake off what ever clung t...And good riddens! Now shake off what ever clung to you and rejoice in YOUR wholeness, holiness. For you have realized you are born of Divinity and IT is your true Grandmother/ Grandfather/ Mother/ Father. <BR/><BR/>(ewwww.... that's deep!) Hugs!!!TACParenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14030661331128426243noreply@blogger.com